Homemade food has been replaced by the fast food these days Is it good for the society Discuss the merits and demerits of both

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Homemade food has been replaced by the fast food these days . Is it good for the society? Discuss the merits and demerits of both.

I agree to this that fast food has replaced the homemade food . Today , many people are much busy in their life and they think preparing food at home is waste of time . What strikes my mind , "How can the people think that preparing food is waste of time " ?

I'm endeavouring to pen certain merits of homemade food and demerits of fast food . Homemade food is good for health because it is made by our mother. She prepares food with love and hygiene way . All the nutrients are present in homemade food . It is prepared with good oil and spices . The taste and flavour of this food is awesome. I believe in one thing that is , if a person is very busy in his work but he eats homemade dinner with his family , so , this is enough time for him to relax himself from whole day work . When people go to foreign country , homemade food is missed by them . Children need more energy because of growing age . Homemade food keeps children fit and healthy . This food gives contentment .

On the other hand , fast food is very spicy and it is made with less qualitative oil and unfresh vegetables are used . These days , people eat more fast food which causes many diseases like obesity , problem related to stomach . Now a days , people are getting lazy because online companies give heavy discounts on online purchase and order reaches within a short period of time .

From my point of view , eating fast food on daily routine can harm our health . If we want to keep our family's health good then our endeavours should be towards educating the people how homemade food is good for us . I'm sure , this step will be instrumental and worthwhile to manifest a healthy society and country .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61409395973 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31133556306 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.955433095 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.75 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418690937673 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143092451427 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106723129809 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239060881359 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08189335435 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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