In this days, traveling to space is an imaginary opinion and scientists are very fascinated toward it.
Although this idea is great, the environmental issues in the earth are more important and at first, we should release it of these problems before thinking about space traveling. For the purpose of this essay, I would analyze some of the environmental problems.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss the idea of space traveling, if we did have not solved the environmental issues on our planet. At first, the impacts of the greenhouse gases have not resolved after a long period of their appearance. The governments must to spent costs in regard to providing facilities that could clean the effects of greenhouse gases from the earth. For example, working to increase the public transportation equipment and encouraging people to use the public vehicles is the task of government in this case.
In addition, there are many people on our planet that have not an ability to feeding. The sense of philanthropic says we should think about the hungry people before spending money to travel to space. For instance, a recent research conducted by MYT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of people in African countries such as Namibia and Ethiopia need to help from wealthy countries to fulfill the costs of treating their patients and feeding the hungry people.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the space traveling, I profoundly believe that the environmental problems are threatening all living creatures on the earth and resolving these issues is vital before this fantastic traveling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18587360595 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84770982084 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5690097864 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343127132171 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120791711704 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929429330401 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18878134475 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630956926789 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.