Recently, the phenomenon of spending too much time at work, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that having time for the personal life is highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that saving much time for the personal life can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss spending too much time at work and lower time for the personal life. At first, many people work for a long time every day to fulfill their families that is a sign of loyalty to their families. However, hardworking is the cause of lower time to being more time besides the family. For example, with the less free time, parents have no time to play or travell with their children.
In addition, the children will not profit from their parents' kindness, and this can be the cause of many disorders in the family situation. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2014 has shown that a significant number of family members in families with busy parents, involved with many mental diseases around the world.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on working a lot and for a long time in every day, I profoundly believe that despite the all advantages with hard working, the drawbacks of it are far outweighed its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90836653386 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70726439189 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7735873732 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383121869204 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167006222147 0.0925447433944 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959093893738 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216854636783 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118110922891 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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