If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
Some people have urge to learn more than one course as they want to get a knowledge everything that they came across and I think I am one of them. If I want to select a different core of study than I’ll keen to know about the computer technology. As, I am a pharmacy student didn’t get much time to know about computer software and their use.
What is the reason behind my preference? Well, firstly, today’s world is beyond the time when people used to work on stacks of paper and the researchers collecting and interpreting data on bundles of sheet. Nowadays every thing is recorded in CD's or hard drive that could only be use on computers. Furthermore, computer are used in everyday and every field of this world that you could imagine from small TV show to bigger application in industries. For example, in pharmaceutical industry every step of a product development is calculated and checked by computer softwares.
Secondly, computer can enhance your social circle and a way to better communication with different civilisation and from this every one can get mutual benefit from your similar field members or others. For example, if you want to collect data for you research project from other countries as well than you foreign contacts can help you get right data from particular individuals that you need to fill out your questionnaire and than putting your data in simple software and here is your results in just couple of minutes. How amazing, isn’t it?
In the nutshell, computer not just speed up your pace of life but also remarkably grateful in making our social circle bigger or stronger than we expect so that we can be benefited from them and we are here for them if they need us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me across and I think I am one of them. If I want to select a different core of st...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son behind my preference? Well, firstly, today’s world is beyond the time when pe...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ters. Furthermore, computer are used in everyday and every field of this world that you ...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ch project from other countries as well than you foreign contacts can help you get r...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...need to fill out your questionnaire and than putting your data in simple software an...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...teful in making our social circle bigger or stronger than we expect so that we ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74581939799 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63683053067 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0135361118 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18619194191 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569600590753 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634450899833 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939049004971 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669817512769 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.