The inclination of human being for more and more advancement in technology and modernization for the betterment of living standard is bound to tamper the environment and create threats to life on the earth.
With on going industralization and technological advancement, human being are enjoying more and more comfort and facilities, but side by side damaging the environment and will continue with this process. Pollution and some other threats are emerged as burning issues. Environmentalists are showing serious concern over such issues and demanding for environmental conservation.
Air pollution is the most common form of pollution on earth. The chimneys of factories gives out smoke which contain poisonous gases like carbon di oxide and carbon moxide. This will mix with air and deteriorate the environment. Vehicular smoke does the same. Human activities in the sector of industrial processes, transportation, agriculture are increasing the concentration of greenhouse gases. The ozone layer of atmosphere is to protect us from harmful ultra violet rays of sun also causing pollution. The industrial chemical wastes discharged in rivers. This finally reaches the sea and harm the aquatic life. The wastes dumped on ground pollute the soil of under ground water. The loud noise of big industrial machines cause noise pollution. The people who exposes to such noise suffer from hearing impairment. Vehicular traffic also cause noise pollution.
The land and water pollution also damaged the environment. The electricity generating nuclear plant realise nuclear pollution which harm the climatic environment.
To conclude, advancement in technology and environment deteriotation go hand to hand. Human are facing new challenges to preserve environmental conservation. Human have to take serious steps to safe the beautiful planet.
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Children in some parts of the world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. Some people think this as a positive change; however, others think of it as a neg 56
- In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors. There is no longer sense of community. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it? 11
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? 56
- people attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? 89
- In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors. There is no longer sense of community. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
With on going industralization and technological adva...
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Suggestion:
...s the sea and harm the aquatic life. The wastes dumped on ground pollute the soil...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ustrial machines cause noise pollution. The people who exposes to such noise suffer...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tricity generating nuclear plant realise nuclear pollution which harm the climat...
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...r plant realise nuclear pollution which harm the climatic environment. To ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80165289256 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16314419257 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3632636776 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.3 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13375368235 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296768465044 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464379709829 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866615966799 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821591925054 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.47 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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