It goes without saying that, some people think. it more play sports that are played in teams. However, other people believe that, it is more beneficial to play individual sports. An arguments has been put forward that, play sports are in teams, holds a valid ground.
There are many reason why I agree with the given statement, play sports are in teams. To begin with, Sports are the game of coordinations, teamwork, support to your team member. Even any individual who try to do play good sports so, they definitely required good team. However, they can play with them and they can improve his mistake due to the help of practice. For instance, Pakistan is the diverse country and Cricket is a most fascinating game in Pakistan. Even in 1992, Pakistan won the world cup just because, of team work and hard work.
In despite of, play individually sports also creates the self motivation and self confidence. However, sports are really good for health. It improves mental health as well as physical health also. For example, Saniya Mirza is the one of the best tennis player in all over the world. She is independently make her identification with the help of her remarkable goal.
Furthermore, some people might argue that, play sports with team have less beneficial rather than individually. In my opinion, Team work and right path of direction always help you in any phase of life. Whether it is sport or something else. No one can break the bunch of wood except than single piece of wood.
I put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, sport is necessary for us. In conclusion, I firmly believe that, play sports with team give more benefits rather than, play individually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79109589041 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53920978262 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7168580778 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.619047619 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35896323503 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111179815299 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127812252837 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211127993978 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147658224929 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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