An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and companies to shopping online?
The way people shop is totally different from what it used to be. More and more individuals purchase what they require from online stores nowadays. There are certainly pros and cons about it which this letter discuss it in more details.
To begin with, online shopping is considered as the quickest and most convenient way of buying the needs. The reason is clear, for companies, the most essential factor to run their business would be a physical place to a store their products. However, provided that they have a website, they are able to turn profits even without a rental property. Besides, they are not obliged to commute distance ways or spend hours and hours in order to find what they are looking for. It can simply be done sitting at home with only a few clicks on the computer or cellphone. It also helps governments to reduce the air pollution caused by my vehicles due to the fact that more people will not leave their homes contrary to the past. As an example, the two major online stores in the US and Iran, cold Amazon and Digikala, not only have been able to make great profits, but also have played a major role in keeping the society in their house and making the purchases from their websites.
Nevertheless, this phenomenon has also drawbacks. Should people want to buy something online, there will be a multitude of websites and the internet, offering what you are trying to obtain. Consequently, the chance of being robbed from fake and illegible websites could be notable. Therefore, so many people still prefer to drive their cars down to the markets. Another point is is specifically about clothes. Many believe that it is quite impossible to make a valuable purchase in clothing section from the sites due to the fact that how one is able to understand whether it suits them or not. Or even they question its material since they cannot touch them. The good example would be pants. In this case, it is clearly a good question that how we can make sure if we are making a reasonable choice?
Finally, the main conclusion to be drawn from this essay hey is that online shopping has transformed the way of buying significantly and has benefited both the shoppers and the business owners. Yet some demerits about it also exist which are are serious point of contention and need to be dealt with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68948655257 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44437400609 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555012224939 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4330909345 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217757487947 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593984318635 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682047450442 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1400783828 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560485126624 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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