An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shop online.
Nowadays, online purchasing is turning into a popular trend, products such as flights, books and groceries have been getting good numbers on this online market. I truly believe the internet market has equal pros and cons. The aim of this essay is to review the internet market and its advantages and disadvantages.
purchase a product online is a risk because the consumer cannot have direct contact with the item before pay for it, for example, an E-bay report published in 2015 says that more than the 20% of their buyers request a refund of money because they were unsatisfied with their product. Furthermore, Amazon has a similar problem with its books market. Despite, 80% of the buyers are satisfied with their purchase or they are not reporting issues.
However, the online market is not only cons, one of the advantages are the online services purchasing because the description of the service is provided by the seller and the buyer is the one that decides to take the service or not according to de description, for instance, flight tickets or accommodation booking is one of the most successful industries in the online market, that was revelled by The Tourism Asociation in Arizona. Due to a service is a non-tangible purchase, it is more effective to be purchased online rather than go directly to the office because it would save time to the buyer.
To sum up, the online market has equal advantages and disadvantages, and this depends on how accurate the description of the products are. Anyhow services have more advantages than tangible products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00380228137 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73541840363 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.447609054 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.6 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0607866822615 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260560202627 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020141783395 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0403057799593 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142667450817 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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