What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shop online?
In these times of technological breakthrough, everything has become online, including shopping. But in this race, our local vendors are lagging behind. Although there are many benefits to shopping online such as time-saving, convenience to list a few, there are disadvantages also. In this essay, I would discuss how we can help small community shops, also the merits and demerits of online shopping in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, the regional shops are facing a hard time attracting customers with the increasing trend of online shopping. In turn, affecting their income. They already earn hand to mouth compared to big brand companies; hence, are in dire need of support. This can be done by advertising their products which spread awareness and acquaint people about their needs. In addition to this, they should endeavour to bring in quality products which would raise a good word of mouth, after all, quality speaks louder than the brand, instead quality makes the brand.
Talking about online shopping, there are tons of benefits for both people and companies. Firstly, for customers, they do not have to go anywhere which saves their time and money. Moreover, it is convenient as one can do it at their own pace at any time, with no opening or closing hours. Secondly, for companies, they are not required to build stores with appealing infrastructure; thus, no need to hire cashiers or store maintenance staff which would decrease their significant amount of cost.
But online shopping is also not without its drawbacks. From times immemorial, shopping has been a great way of socializing, especially for women. Further, individuals can not touch a product or can not try it. Besides, they can not grab the product instantly, instead, they had to wait for a few days to get it. To add to it, if the product is not up to our expectations, the refund and return are also cumbersome. Companies also have to face some difficulties, such as some customer lies that they did not receive the item, so they have to either refund it or resend it. Also, the competition is so high that they have to introduce new strategies regularly to increase their sales. Timely deliveries and producing expected quality is a great challenge.
To encapsulate, the producer and sellers of local products are facing a hard time to attract customers hence we should give them a try otherwise these would vanish. Irrefutably, online shopping is easy and convenient but it is taking away our time which we used to spend with our friends and family to do shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... to list a few, there are disadvantages also. In this essay, I would discuss how we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, after all, in addition, such as, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7391123771 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8348479231 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0434782609 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6956521739 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183819936815 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552791825167 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425888990893 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100863041735 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207268798709 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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