Intelligent machines such as robots are widely deployed to take the palace of human beings. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage.
Roberts and intelligent machine are the outcome of latest technology and they perform many task accurately and efficiently. Using high speed computers and robots at work is growing in wide variety of area. But many people are worried if they are going to replace the human beings even though there are many advantages of using them.
Lets begin with the advantages: firstly, using robots is the good option to overcome the human error and limitations. For example Roberts do not need vacation, coffee or smoke break and unlike human beings they can work longer hour at the same rate and can easily do risky as well as heavier tasks. Secondly, using them increases the productivity and reduce the cost in long term. At first it might be costly to install them but over the period of time they are cheaper options because they don’t need regular pay, expensive life insurances and other workplace health and safety requirements, which are essential for human workers. Finally, they brings accuracy and efficiency in performing task.They run through the preset programs and there is less chance of happening error. Because of their accuracy, they are used in a wide variety of area such as medical surgery, research lab, factories etc.
On the other hands, despite of many advantages, using supercomputers have some disadvantages too. First of all, many people scare about unemployment. One single Robert can accomplish the task of many people and so they could easily replace people from the job. In addition to unemployment, they contribute income inequality. People involved in manufacture, installation and repair of those machine make a lot of money and this phenomena concentre wealth to limited people. Secondly, installation and repair cost is very expensive and not affordable to many small and medium business. Similarly, technology keep changing over the time upgrading and updating of those super machine also very costly. Finally, the economic crisis could appear because of overproduction and unemployment at the same time. When Roberts are at work there will be mass production and unemployed people have lower purchasing power to buy the output.
In conclusion, growing use of Roberts is unavoidable as they provide many benefits but, while using them, the consideration is to be made to keep unemployment rate low.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Suggestion: many tasks
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Suggestion: to vacation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21485411141 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76601742486 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570291777188 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5010504405 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.473684211 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859648265856 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286139972188 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353176528457 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591922043534 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553378774303 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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