In this era, the internet is a key to open the modern world information and it is given more opportunities to learn new things in the world. These days internet is very important for people because they can be take any information in a second. Every people use internet for avoid their loneliness, to enjoy their life in any moment, to do new things as a great researches and to build up new afirs with modern world. But in my view, every information on the internet is not reliable because there are many fake information like if we want to get some details in particular person, the internet can give some fake details about him or she. And also we want to get some actions to control this truthless informations. To do this can be take good security system, giving limited access for some websites and inform people how to use the internet correctly.
In my opinion, all information on the internet is not true. To prove this statement there are so many example in these days. Now, I would like to show some examples to prove this. Nowadays, we can see some websites published a researches that are not given the correct information. This can be happen because of any people can published any paper paying the money to some research journals. They not always checkwhether that paper is true or false because of the money. And also, any people can added some fake details of anyone in the world for example using facebook or any social media can be used to do these type of illegal things. Therefore every time, and every moment the internet does not show the truthful information.
In this situation, we want to take actions to avoid this. So, taking some online actions can be control the fake information. The government should be play major role to this using perfect security systems and giving limited accesses when their people go through the internet. And also, if the government found the some websites whose gave some wrong information to their people, then that websites should be banded. Furthermore, the media can be inform how to use internet more valueblly and avoiding fake information for their peoples.
In conclude, internet plays major role in the society to get the worldwide information. But every informations are can not be trust. Therefore we want to know how to choose the internet correctly and valueblly to get information. To avoid the fake results, the government and media can be take a online actions. In future, I hope internet and their search engines will be acts well for the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...to learn new things in the world. These days internet is very important for people b...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...an be take any information in a second. Every people use internet for avoid their lon...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'many examples'.
Suggestion: many examples
...e. To prove this statement there are so many example in these days. Now, I would like to sho...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a research' or simply 'researches'?
Suggestion: a research; researches
...ays, we can see some websites published a researches that are not given the correct informat...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...sed to do these type of illegal things. Therefore every time, and every moment the intern...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'played'?
Suggestion: played
...e information. The government should be play major role to this using perfect securi...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
.... And also, if the government found the some websites whose gave some wrong informat...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...very informations are can not be trust. Therefore we want to know how to choose the inter...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s, the government and media can be take a online actions. In future, I hope inter...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...vernment and media can be take a online actions. In future, I hope internet and their s...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...and media can be take a online actions. In future, I hope internet and their search engin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in particular, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75227272727 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57246123745 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418181818182 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9839884595 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311317953648 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105007398735 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951899764156 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214352623464 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833136820009 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.