the internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. is all information reliable on the internet? what could be done to control information online?
The introduction of the internet has revolutionized our lives. In the current scenario, the internet is seen as a key source of information and also acts as an opportunistic for the individuals. In addition, all the information available on the internet is not trustworthy. I completely agree with this statement. In regards to the same, many measures can be taken to control the reliability of the information.
There are many reasons for my agreement on the non-reliability. The primary reason is that many people often see YouTube videos or use other sources because they think that the current world is technology driven and everything available on technology is of utility. This trust is also created if any of the information in the past has proved to be of value. The other reason could be that anyone on the internet is becoming a writer or a publisher without doing any research or understanding the criticality of the situation. There could be other reasons like many individuals do not have knowledge about the factually correct websites to be considered for any information. Research has shown that twenty per cent of the information provided on the internet is not relevant.
However, this does not mean that all the information available on the internet is erroneous.
Additionally, many measures can be taken to control the reliability of the information available over the internet. The technology department of the government can play a vital role in the information being available; the department can take control of sieving all information before it is posted. Strict penalties should be levied upon the individuals posting wrong and incorrect information. Search engines should show trustworthy sources on the first page of the search results.
To conclude, the Internet has changed the lives of the individuals and has positioned itself in the minds of the people as a true source of information. But, we should check the authenticity of the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.178125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14692310043 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478125 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1736020369 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0555555556 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395647705536 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122665223509 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984972056703 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2285474233 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801466308231 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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