The internet has brought about many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we are doing things such as mailing, contacting, banking and communication much faster. Do these developments have more advantages than disadvantages?
...A prayer FOR TODAY
Ancient of days, glory to you, turning on me Your healing rays; glory to you, subduing the power of the spirits of darkness and dooming to death every evil; glory to you for the signs of Your presence, for the joy of hearing Your voice and living in Your love. glory to you, O god, from age to age. Lord, let me begin this day in devout meditations, in joy unspeakable, and in blessing and praising you, who has given me such good hope and everlasting consolation. Lift up my mind above all these little things below, which are apt to distract my thoughts; and keep it above, until my heart is fully resolved to seek you every moment, in the path where jesus has trod before me. Dear god, remind me that you are with me every step of the day, watching me, ready to help, protecting my soul even when the things of this world give me pain. let my every minute be lived in Your presence. let my every action be an offering of love to you, and my every word be a prayer. Instill in me the right values so I can be a role model; and may my cup and wellness grow in fullness until it overflows. In jesus' awesome Name I pray (Amen)...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Let
... the things of this world give me pain. let my every minute be lived in Your presen...
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Suggestion: Let
...every minute be lived in Your presence. let my every action be an offering of love ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24336283186 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30624375962 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1180923984 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0349670956548 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0148665899145 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221255733932 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0176793109639 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176793109639 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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