The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
Over the latest years, gay marriage has been a controversial topic since last decades. While it is a natural trend and right of the people to choose this type of marriage, many believe it has adverse effect on the society. Personally, I believe that this trend will benefit society. And this essay below will discuss and explain more about my points of view.
Gay marriage has caused emotional and political clashes between supporters and opponents. Having support from the community, it is clear that gay will have more opportunities to make friends and find suitable partners leading to happy life. If gay can live as their tru seft they could be more productive and happy, that would eventually be beneficial for themselves and the society. Many people advise others to choose the best thing in their journey life but perfect don’t mean that it is matching.
Choosing the person who wants to share life with is one of the most important decisions that any of us make. Ever, because when it’s wrong, life becomes to grey. Do not believe in traditions because they have been handed down for many generations. But after observation and analysis, when you find that anything agrees with reason and is conducive to the good and benefit of one and all, then accept it and live up to it.
In conclusion, it would be beneficial for whole the community to support gay marriage and it should be made be made legal to enforce the people’s right to choose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[2]
Message: The adverb 'Ever' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...mportant decisions that any of us make. Ever, because when it’s wrong, life becomes ...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'be made'.
Suggestion: be made
...y to support gay marriage and it should be made be made legal to enforce the people’s right to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78174603175 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48665815059 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0294186965 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362818017095 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113937303434 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113819735676 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214281663424 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133413831611 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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