Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinions
In the modern world, people always try to upgrade their technologies and knowledge. So that now alot of countries and alao some company like SpaceX are trying to discover the universal. In that giant discovery revelation, some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. But other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. With me, in my opinion I will prefer qith the first idea. In fact at the past, alot of scientists had done that job and until now, there aren't any problem appears. Also it is impossible to have another livable planet so our message will need alot of time to travel to another intelligent life forms may be it will count by lightyear so that people will have enought time to upgrade the weapons if people scare about what will happen. But if people luckily can contact with another intelligent creatures and come in peace, it will the one of the the biggest chance for people to upgrade the knowledge and data, it will be awesome. In the otherhand, may be there are some epic high intelligent creatures that have the really high technology weapons and spacecraft, they want to have the Earth, they will defeat people easily and have the Earth. So the way that I prefer can make us into trouble but there are 2 view to see. So the problem here depend on our luck so if people want to know, we need to try.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: aren't
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Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...ravel to another intelligent life forms may be it will count by lightyear so that peop...
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Suggestion: the
...s and come in peace, it will the one of the the biggest chance for people to upgrade th...
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Suggestion: the; the
...s and come in peace, it will the one of the the biggest chance for people to upgrade th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50775193798 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35796891982 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3569112408 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.727272727 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276036090126 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131828468873 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195141280992 0.0667982634062 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276036090126 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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