Is it acceptable to clone humans? What is your opinion?
Nowadays, our earth’s technology are developing every second and it is improving scientific knowledge. That’s why cloning a trendy figure in our life. Therefore, I partially agree with this consideration.
To start with, there are some reasons why cloning is acceptable. The first reason is that science have never used in a bad intention. Because genetic scientists usually utilize humans cloning in genetically process. The second reason is that. Cloning make life easier, even tough, human cloning is disturbing the balance in our life. For example, some people are not able to have a baby, but with humans cloning people can have a children from same genes.
Secondly, on the other hand, despite the fact human cloning have benefits it also has disadvantages. For example, cloning have psychological effects on our life because no one want to see people with the same looking. In addition, cloning disturb humans rights because there is not any punishment for cloning in the rules of people and at that time no one pay attention to the people opinions.
To sum up, I believe science improves every second and these technologies are very big success for us. I hope, in the future human cloning affect us in a good way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03414634146 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68033577766 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2562450637 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7142857143 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207713304337 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079852112004 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680191569854 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12421130635 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585075950146 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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