In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?
We live in an age when the apathy in playing and listening to classical music has evolved in some countries. Therefore, I assume that this issue stems from several reasons and but it is pointless to encourage the young.
First of all, the speed and rhythm of classical music, with its many stops and starts, tempo, dynamic and mood changes, and length is the exact opposite of what the teenage spirit appeals to. In more detail, the new generation talks, plays, and thinks fast. Hence, they also want their music fast. They also have an attention period of three minutes, which is not suitable for sonata but perfect for that modern genres. Modern tunes are also structured simply, and quite against the complexity of classical music. The second reason why teenagers are not interested in playing classical music is that musical instruments are very expensive, as well as training courses are time-consuming. That is why not so many young people can tolerate how difficult classical music is. For instance, a pianist is bound to study for eight to nine years at the music academy, but a listener can be easier to cover a pop song from his favorite singer. Subsequently, the vastness of today’s musical types and high demands of playing instruments leads to a downward trend in classical music.
Even though classical music is a vivid part of our life, it is insignificant to oblige young people to pursue classical music. Unless they have the inner motivation, they won't consciously follow classical music. For instance, it is more essential to have real passion rather than parental pressure. Otherwise, forcing them to play or listen to classical music will be meaningless
To conclude, modern type of music is more relevant for the young generation rather than classical music. Because of the fact that everyone has a different passion and the harshness of playing that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00955414013 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61342360913 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9934588048 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437231341884 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143689365352 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112625053359 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290381263575 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416861319701 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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