It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?
There is no doubt that nations’ culture and heritage are protected through museums. However, nowadays, many of these great places are struggling to open their doors, which requires action from both governments and individuals, as this essay will discuss.
Countries should be responsible for supporting museums in a number of ways. For one, subsidizing more amount of money is a viable solution because it will directly endorse the budget of these institutions. For example, when the Egyptian government funded the tourism ministry, which oversight all historical places, with 20 million dollars last year, Noba Museum managed to operate five days a week instead of three as a result of this. Nevertheless, this action alone is not sufficient, and officials should also raise public awareness about the substantial importance of these venues. This may bring the attention of local people to visit and donate to their nearby museums, which was implemented and delivered more income in Cairo last year.
Perhaps even more important, that individuals can take part in helping museums to sustain. Undoubtedly, if more people donate on a regular basis to reduce the financial burden, museums would benefit greatly from this type of aid. For example, Bill Gates is funding many historic venues in the USA, and they are utilizing this money in paying monthly salaries and bills. Moreover, if people visit these places more often, the rise in tickets money and entrance fees would be another probable solution. In fact, more and more Egyptian people are doing this as a way to aid their national heritage, which solved the financial problems of many museums there.
In conclusion, protecting museums is a huge responsibility that all parties should play a pivotal role in maintaining their doors open for visitors from all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28474576271 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68678231266 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4364142542 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140470122065 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517487210004 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439680076769 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825340414506 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245480196818 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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