A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
There is no doubt that health has always been an essential factor to lead a happy life. While some people argue that keeping a healthy life is an individual responsibility, I believe it is a shared obligation between both people and their governments.
On the one hand, people can exert efforts to protect their physical and psychological conditions. First and foremost, abandoning harmful unhealthy habits, which can impact the human body, would be beneficial and help people live longer. For example, drinking alcohol and smoking had been among the most common causes of death in recent years; thus, it is understandable why people should discard these habits. In addition, adopting an active lifestyle can also support individuals well-being; which is a personal matter. If adults exercise regularly and visit doctors occasionally, they are more likely to stay healthy and protect themselves from chronic diseases, especially diabetes and hypertension.
However, governments ought to take part in elevating people's health. In fact, some major problems that cause serious health issues require governmental action. If countries impose rules and regulations, they would lessen air pollution, especially in Asia and Africa, where environmental pollution has reached alarming levels. It is also worth mentioning that building hospitals and providing suitable healthcare are a government responsibility. This can be observed in developed nations where hospitals are well-established and equipped; therefore, people can be treated easily, and more lives are saved.
In conclusion, I argue that leading a healthy life is an outcome of joined efforts between individuals and their governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70866141732 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06277958091 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6400479482 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638855371534 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246365721405 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167322332348 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380958928832 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122545488129 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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