It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education
and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?
It is argued that stays fit and healthy are indispensable for the youth and children. Hence, government should encourage it through education and sports, by making physical education as a compulsory subject on school. I strongly believed that education and sport will help to outweigh the problem of unhealthiness among the youngsters. Over the course of this essay will provide reason for the viewpoint.
There are various reasons why people think that physical education should be required in all schools. The preliminary reason is to raise study more than that of academic study such as helping children to become better in all round sense rather than a merely academic experience. Some aspects of physical education are vital for future well-being like being able to swing and learn how to lift heavy weights safely. I think it helps the children to improve their skills that are actually required for education program.
On the other hand, Sports play vital role in the development of youth. Sport’s activities like cricket, football, singing and puzzle games assist the children in term of their fitness and activeness. By participating in these activities like students come to know their ability and stamina. For example, some school organize summer champ which help the students to explore different sports and creative activities that actually increase their self-confidence and keep them relaxed and healthy.
Having considered a range of argument, I have concluded that the benefits of physical education and sports in schools outweigh the health’s issues among students. From raising the education system to increase student’s self-confidence, the benefits are far and wide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, so, well, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47547169811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8749665282 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4646670627 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241334210933 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817616232273 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572454753681 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131782762944 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688393804697 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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