It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
In fact everyone in the world has a different and special talent. Someone can be talented in sports, someone in art, someone in education.
Some people believe that people are born with natural talent in a particular field such as sports or music. This theory may be biologically correct. Because it has been scientifically proven that a certain talent is passed from parent to child through genes. For example, this theory has been confirmed in sports. The children of famous sportsmen have also managed to become famous sportsmen. For instance, in football, Leicester football club's goalkeeper Casper Schmeichel is the son of Peter Schmeichel, one of the most popular players of the last century.
Some believe that people can be the best sportsmen or musicians by learning a field thoroughly. People can learn some skills and a person must have a strong desire to learn that skills. They learn the skills from the books and practice it. Nowadays, some educational institutions are opened with purpose to develop children in special skills. For example, music schools or football schools.
Everyone has talents such as music, art or sports. In my opinion talents are not always exist since people are born. Skills are learned through strong desire, teaching and life experiences
- This table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
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- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02392344498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51026144325 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 209.0 20.2975951904 1030% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1050.0 106.682146367 984% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 209.0 20.7667163134 1006% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 77.0 7.06120827912 1090% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344130486933 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.344130486933 0.084324248473 408% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186832754759 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576265938099 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.7 13.0946893788 815% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -132.2 50.2224549098 -263% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.6 11.3001002004 740% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.33 8.58950901804 202% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 85.6 10.1190380762 846% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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