It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some conclude that a few people are already born with talents for arts or sports, and others do not have the same luck. Although, others argue that any child could learn anything they want and be a future athlete or, for example, a pianist. This essay will argue that any person, independent of age or talent, could learn different types of technical skills and become anything they wish.
It is often said that people are born with talents for several arts or skills, and it can be noticeable from an early age. Those people can easily have a good career in life, for example, there are some individuals that are born with body flexibility and that is why the parents think that they were born to be ballerinas, gymnastics or contortionists. Sometimes it can be true but sometimes it is not. However, others are born with no talent at all and parents think that they do not have any type of artistry for sports or instruments, which can be very frustrating. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the last point of view and I would say that anyone can be taught to become good in anything they want.
It is a matter of fact that if you are born with some good talents, you will succeed easily in some activities, but at the same time, if you did not find your competence yet, it does not mean you could not learn something new and be good at it. Due to that, it is known that between the ages 5 and 10, kids will start asking the moms and dads to try some new activities at school, and that is the stage of life that the family should encourage the kids to try new things and let them build different abilities. For instance, a famous ballerina from Brazil called Ana Daniela started her classical ballet studies at the age of 15, which some think is too late but, today she is considered one of the best ballerinas in the world because, firstly she believed in herself and also, her mother agreed that even without any talent for dance, she could learn.
In conclusion, despite some agree that people are born with good abilities to be an artist or a famous musician and others can not because of lack of skills, I believe that any person can learn new things in life and It is all about embracing the learn and believing in themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s in life and It is all about embracing the learn and believing in themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44552058111 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33531060859 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489104116223 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8631564801 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4166666667 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375603800584 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152579771804 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665885628475 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237527674288 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893306468356 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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