It is difficult for one to lead a normal life without some basic facilities such as transportation to reach office, a fridge to preserve food, a television for entertainment during free time, etc. For this reason, everyone may well wanted to own a car, a tv and fridge alongside other basic necessary items. In my opinion, it is not a mistake of one who desires to have nice things but if the advanatages and disadvantages be weighed down, he might change the choice and look for alternative where possible.
But I wouldn’t argue with possession of a tv and fridge be comrpomised for any reason. Because I consider these are basic necessasities that helps a healthy living and lead normal life.
At the same time, before owning a car one must assess all possible options and its merits and demerits. it is highly recommended to assess their wants properly before taking firm decision to buy something like a car. One may well comfortable to use a public transport for going to work to whom there is proper access to a bus or rail transport facility in walkable distance. So this person can save a lot money that likely to be expended on buying car, fuel, taxes, parking fee and stuffs like that. Most importantly he will be using sustainable transport in which certain per capita carbon emissions will reduced.
Similarly the other person if he is in opposite situation where the access to use public transport is not possible, he will have two choices to assess. In first choice that, he should shift his accommodation to a place that have proper access to reach office and back home via public transport is available. In case of, the rental for the accommodation found to costing extra and also it is risk reporting late to office, he should be ready to spend the money needed to own a car but he must aware what he compromised in this alternative. So here, the extra money he supposed to fund increases the chances of reporting office on time and provide him the luxury of owning a car which he can use for other purposes as well.
In conclusion, it can be well understood that there always a disadvantage of certain think would likely to be outweighed by advantages and which will be know only when the choices are properly assessed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e options and its merits and demerits. it is highly recommended to assess their w...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended assessing'.
Suggestion: recommended assessing
... its merits and demerits. it is highly recommended to assess their wants properly before taking firm...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
... a car. One may well comfortable to use a public transport for going to work to whom there is prop...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...ertain per capita carbon emissions will reduced. Similarly the other person if he is i...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... capita carbon emissions will reduced. Similarly the other person if he is in opposite s...
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Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase of, the rental for the accommodation found to costing extra and also it is ri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso it is risk reporting late to office, he should be ready to spend the money ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67171717172 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71197543012 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7937590683 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132621613024 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492975470755 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567078764263 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799278449285 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384709453144 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.