People have different views about the simultaneous survival of technology developments and traditional cultures. In my opinion, I argue that technology and traditions are compatibly thriving together in some parts of the world.
It is true that the advances in technology lead to the disappearance of some traditional customs. For example, in Britain, in the pre-industrial period generations used to live in the same families and village communities. They enjoyed outdoor activities, common religious and ceremonies together. In this contemporary world, young generations tend to move to modern cities because of their desired ambition in making progress in their career path. It is easier for them to secure a job and have opportunities to pursue their passion in such cities. Most British villages today are inhabited by commuters, many of them even do not pay attention to the history of these are and their neighbours.
Apart from the value argument mentioned above, I concur that technological development does not affect traditions somewhere. For instance, in Vietnam, novel technologies play a huge role in traditional agricultural cultures. Former farmers used to apply their risky intuitions and experiences, which is passed on by parents and elders, to forecast weather and harvest. Today, thanks to the advent of mobile apps, farmers could have precise awareness about weather predictions and market price estimations. Their income and harvest are therefore significantly improved. This is strong evidence that the increasing development of technology still accompanies traditional cultures.
In conclusion, there are convincing reasons to understand why some assert technology harms the existence of traditions. However, I believe they could survive together due to their reciprocal supports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70740740741 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15463601626 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8236750653 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205487702972 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710070534878 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822939455955 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130839070861 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781291906944 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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