As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that maximizing profits is the most important goal of businesses. However, in my opinion, I totally agree with the idea that companies should have responsibilities in terms of welfare projects and social contributions.
On the one hand, a wealthy financial budget is an essential target for a company’s surviving in the competitive environment. They have to enough money to cover running costs such as building rental fees, employees’ salaries and equipment investment. Companies often tends to have loans from banks to invest in their huge projects or financial strategies. Therefore, they might have to ensure their strong budget to pay for the banks if they want to have a sustainable development. Briefly, making profits is a survival concerns of a firm if they want to remain their successful and counter their opponents.
On the other hand, I side with proponents that businesses should have some policy in favor of social contribution. Firstly, company owners and managers could have extra money to support their employees such as transportation fees or living costs rather than solely exploiting them. This ensure the workers might have a better quality of life and therefore directly contribute to the development of the society. Secondly, businesses earn money on the sources around them, owners therefore should be happy to share a proportion in their profits to local charity projects.
In conclusion, although a strong budget is always a crucial concern of any business, but I personally concur that social responsibilities should be given the same attention by businesses instead of solely focusing on the financial objective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding sources'?
Suggestion: the surrounding sources
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33969465649 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05544065816 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.021628618 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179118546991 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628741610454 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442105224668 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107970966183 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225393494936 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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