Animal extinction is the reason and causes for many environmental changes. Since it's the cause of environmental change and directly or indirectly affecting human lives it's necessary to study the extinction of various species. The cause for species extinction is either natural or manmade disaster it's highly, I completely disagree that there is no reason to prevent animal extinction to happen. Animal extinction can have either good effects or extremely bad effects on the surrounding environment. Every animal species is indirectly getting the affected cause of this extinction change in the ecosystem when Animal extinction happens there will be imbalance of lives of different species which may lead to various problems such as unavailability of shelter , scarcity of food. Due to this biological imbalance, it'll indirectly affect the human and mass destruction can occur.
If it's because of the manmade cause we can surely try to avoid animal extinction. Even if it's because of some natural cause where a man can do something to help one species then human beings should try to avoid animal extinction as it'll affect all ecosystems and imbalance may happen. Preserving the life form on the surface of the earth is every human being's responsibility in turn if we didn't then it's gonna affect all of us in the long run
Sometimes many people do animal hunting for collecting the there horns, rib-cages, etc but because of this human nature, some species such as Chittah, Lion,Tiger, Elephants are in danger, If we didn't do anything for them now then it'll be too late for us to realize what we did and we will suffer from various problems such as scarcity of food, less habitat for species, many new diseases can arise due to extinction, species of mosquitos and the animals which the endangered species pray will rise in number, and altogether it'll be hard on all of the life forms.
Furthermore, as we have seen species like dinosaurs have gone extinct because of natural causes ( big meteoroids crashed on the surface of the earth ) and they don't have proper shelter to save themselves, because of magnanimous size and lack of habitat their species have gone extinct. because of the extinction of dinosaurs, there was an imbalance in the ecosystem. while other species occur to know about the imbalance there was a struggle for survival for many species, due to the increase in population of species there was struggle for finding food, habitat which resulted in much more destruction
In conclusion, just due to the sake of human greedy nature if we didn't prevent one species gone extinct we will have to suffer many consequences. Many organizations have been established to protect endangered animal species which are trying to protect animals from getting extinct. We should try to protect as many animals as we can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03411513859 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7409218858 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430703624733 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.433912215 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.642857143 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294565980837 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12484249426 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833882897489 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169137568832 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044564188667 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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