It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

Often we come across the phrase " Mother is the first teacher " and it's absolutely true. The first interaction which a newly born has in this world is with his mother, so how a mother or parents influence their child plays a vital role in shaping the life of a child. Thus, parenting is a crucial stage in one's life as a parent and must be dealt with the same manner and care as that of a Potter while he makes his pot.

In ancient times there were joint families, all the people from parents, grandparents to great grand parents over under one roof. In this way the manners, culture of the family were easily acquired by the little ones as it all were practically seen by them. But now with the advent of nuclear family, the above mentioned system of imbibing the culture is gone and parenting is not a cup of tea now.

Parents hardly get time to interact with the kids as both are working and child is totally up to the Creche or day care centres and sometimes to day boarding in case of a grown-up child. In this of parenting the culture of the family and the demeanour of today's kids are vanishing. Thus, parental training is the need of the hour to make today's parent aware of their responsibility of up bringing a responsible citizen of a nation as a child is tomorrow's future. Training will really guide on how to interact, behave, impart culture and divert their kid's path from this techy World of mobile phones, internet, videogames and inculcate healthy habits as "Habits maketh a man".

Agglomerating all the above points, it's now imperative for today's generation parents to take out time from their hectic schedule and visit the seminars, training programs on parenting and contribute their part in nation building.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
.... Thus, parenting is a crucial stage in ones life as a parent and must be dealt with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66774193548 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52237644582 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3532482316 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241689880811 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940942149044 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757148956331 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149345927783 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638787297648 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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