Do you believe that societies ought to enforce capital punishment or Are there alternative forms of punishment that would be better used?
What is your opinion?
Do you believe that societies ought to enforce capital punishment or are there alternative forms of punishment that would be better used?
What is your opinion?
Human mind is the greatest treasure ever given to the mankind by the god almighty. it now rests on us,we humanbeings how to apply,If used well can make the planet a heaven and if applied negatively can prove disastrous leading to various crimes such as murders, gang rape, robbery, corruption etc. To deter the people from these evils and to deliver justice to the victim and their family the law uses various punishment and one such is the capital punishment or death to the culprit.
Though few cases of crimes are really horrendous and is unpardonable but in many cases studies on jail inmates has revealed that the person who has done the crime is really sorry. As far as humanity is concerned it stirs a sense of crime by not giving the culprit to repent and improve his deeds.The culprit suffers for a moment till death but his family mourns for life long period. Therefore it's better to put people behind bars as a punishment where they have to pay for their misdeeds as well as there are many jails where rehabilitation of inmates takes place by giving them various religious lessons to change their perspective of leading their life. Apart from this, diverse vocational training is provided so that they can excel in particular field and make a living after being released from there.
As a conclusion, it is better to keep the culprits in jails for them to repent and improve so that they can become a good humanbeing and a responsible citizen of a nation rather than capital punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, well, apart from, in particular, such as, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79238754325 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52937626301 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7953538231 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289708368586 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14692588089 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.253560664854 0.0667982634062 380% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269645148132 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.308563775895 0.056905535591 542% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.