It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course. Do you agree or disagree?
Parenting patterns play most important role for physical growth and mental development of the child. To do this responsibly and effectively in the modern era, parents should definitely take the advantage of dedicated parenting training sessions. I absolutely agree with the viewpoint of this essay and will discuss its benefits in terms of positive development of the child and parental stress management in demanding stints.
Primarily, parenting guidance helps new parents in nurturing child using the positive approach which enhances their child raising skills. For instance, correct child eating habits and toilet training in early years are the stages which demands an optimistic way of teaching, without any criticism and bribe involvement. However, if parents deny attending these sessions, they will become knowledge deficit and start implementing trial and error methods on children, which may impact them negatively at times.
In addition, by these courses, parents get the opportunity to learn new techniques of child raising during the stressful period of their lives. Let’s take an example of the child suffering with fever or some other physical problem who demands more sensitive handling and care. So, on this moment, these trainings will help the parents to cope with difficult situations without losing self-control and tolerance power. Moreover, these learnings increase the confidence levels of parents in themselves.
To summarize, learning positive methods of child rearing and handling the difficult stages hastily, are some benefits that parenting courses offer to the parents. Hence, it is beneficial for parents and the society to join these guided training sessions and raise our next generations effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60079051383 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71643605201 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9102073125 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286592406652 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115141196803 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645480228275 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156792278801 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744785340168 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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