In today's world, with the advent of technology, the popularity of online shopping is rapidly increasing day-by-day. As every coin has two sides, even this development has its own merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the development in detail.
To commence with, there are plentiful reasons in the vogue of e-commerce among individuals. The first and foremost is people want to stay at home, and they can order anything with the help of the internet because online shopping can be done anywhere at any time around the world. Secondly, e-commerce gives a wide range of various options to explore the products of our interest whereas the commercial market's shops have limited options available. Thirdly, a lot of sites offer cash delivery options of the product. As a result, consumers are not worried about giving details of credit cards online. Lastly, It has reduced the congestion of traffic on roads and overcrowding in shopping malls. In my opinion, online shopping is a spectacular development that has provided tremendous choices of items listed on e-commerce.
On the flip side, as every sword has two edges, we cannot deny the loopholes of online shopping. Sometimes due to the poor quality and size as the manufacturers shown on websites are not promised, consumers become fools after buying products from the internet. These manufacturers only want to collect money instead of making customers happy and satisfied. However, this problem has been solved by e-commerce companies by providing feedback options and returning policy on their portals. Consequently, individuals easily find out the quality of a product. Finally, people have become shopping maniacs due to the ample amount of options on the internet which have been a drawback for humans who are spending long hours on the internet.
To recapitulate, in consonance with my perception, the rising demand for shopping on the internet is a good development and in tune its benefits to consumers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06501547988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68284787992 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 323.0 20.2975951904 1591% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1636.0 106.682146367 1534% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 323.0 20.7667163134 1555% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 124.0 7.06120827912 1756% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205411752974 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205411752974 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147126154029 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652420618984 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 163.9 13.0946893788 1252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -256.37 50.2224549098 -510% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 129.3 11.3001002004 1144% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.91 8.58950901804 278% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.2 10.1190380762 1297% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... both sides of the development in detail To commence with there are plentiful rea...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the vogue of ecommerce among individuals The first and foremost is people want to...
^^
Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous choices of items listed on ecommerce On the flip side as every sword has two ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt and in tune its benefits to consumers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06501547988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68284787992 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 323.0 20.2975951904 1591% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1636.0 106.682146367 1534% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 323.0 20.7667163134 1555% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 124.0 7.06120827912 1756% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205411752974 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205411752974 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147126154029 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652420618984 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 163.9 13.0946893788 1252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -256.37 50.2224549098 -510% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 129.3 11.3001002004 1144% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.91 8.58950901804 278% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.2 10.1190380762 1297% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.