It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity.
Why is it so?
Is it a good or bad development?
In today’s globalised world,with the wide spread of worldwide web,online shopping is gaining popularity in leaps and bounds. As every coin has two sides, even this development has its own merits and demerits. I will emaciated my views in the below versus.
To begin with,there are plentiful reasons behind the vogue of e-commerce. The first and foremost is,people want to stay at home and they can order anything with the help of Internet. As well as they reckon that in store shopping provide fewer options to them but on the flip side,Internet opens up multiple avenues to explore. Thirdly,a lot of sites offer cash on delivery option therefore masses are not even worried about giving credit details online. Lastly but not least,youngster want to look aesthetic like their favourite celebrity therefore they can find easily anything related to their choice.
According to me,online shopping is a spectacular development. The first factor is,it provides tremendous choice and fewer price for the consumers. Moreover,online shopping help to reduce congestion on urban roads and overcrowding on shopping malls.
On the flip side,as every sword has two edges as we cannot denied its loopholes. Sometimes the quality and size of the product is not good as they shown on the sites therefore nu companies make masses fool and they just want to collect money. Moreover,one can become a shopping maniac due to the so much options. Finally people argue that using Internet for longer hours has its own drawbacks on the users.
All in all, the rising demand of shopping on the Internet is a good development according to me and in tune with the nature of modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77950944004 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6047220454 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197325683009 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582186223034 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472780742859 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114266996696 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431134258424 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.