A major initiative to save wildlife is being observed in recent years. Leveraging money on saving animals or concentrating on other problems in a country is always debatable. This essay will argue why a fixed amount should be invested for the wild inhabitants while the major focus of a government should be on taking care of important problems regarding the people.
Protecting wild creatures is always important, though there are other concerns in the society. Being a part of nature, government officials should focus on protecting the wild. Since deforestations are rampant in our society, it is high time that concerns regarding inhabitants of the forest should not be ignored. According to a survey, many wild creatures are killed by village people settled near the forests. Similarly, many villagers are also consumed by wildlife as their daily food. Since human beings are supposing to live in harmony with nature and its constituents, the government should give top priority for the well being and preservation of the wild in order to maintain stability in nature.
Being a country of such a huge population, it should be the prime focus to protect concerns related to the people of the country and not to wildlife. Solving poverty problems being the topmost priority, there are other aspects that need to be taken care such as corruption, human welfare, etc. Since, millions of farmers and labor workers die of poverty every year, the administration should take proper steps to prevent that. Although, taking care of wildlife is important, but masses who elected a government must have the right of getting importance than anyone else.
Protecting and thinking about the welfare of forest creatures are increasing nowadays. This essay argued that although, it is the wildlife who need a helping hand from the government, but being a part of a developing country, I strong agree that concerns related to common people have to be addressed first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ekta
...14/01/20, 2:33:10 PM] Sumit Das: basto? ekta help dorkar chilo [14/01/20, 2:33:16 P...
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Suggestion: Do
... other problems that are more important?Do you agree or disagree? Reported 2017, G...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...oddar: Wildlife is an essential part of the our societies. Its absorbs many poisonous g...
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Line 22, column 409, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this expenditure' or 'these expenditures'?
Suggestion: this expenditure; these expenditures
...o protect the wildlife. For some people these expenditure is required; whereas others believe tha...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun country seems to be countable; consider using: 'many countries'.
Suggestion: many countries
... with few basic needs for themselves in many country. Due to the rapid growth of populations...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...meet the hunger. This trend has already make the wildlife worse and if we stay in th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ate in controlling the wildlife. So the governments money and regulations are expected to p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtant problems regarding the people. Protecting wild creatures is always impo...
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Message: The verb suppose is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'suppose'
Suggestion: suppose
...as their daily food. Since human beings are supposing to live in harmony with nature and its ...
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...as their daily food. Since human beings are supposing to live in harmony with nature and its ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...der to maintain stability in nature. Being a country of such a huge populatio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...getting importance than anyone else. Protecting and thinking about the welfar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 48.0 13.1623246493 365% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4912.0 1615.20841683 304% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 849.0 315.596192385 269% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78563015312 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.39792595065 4.20363070211 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.97700122327 2.80592935109 177% => OK
Unique words: 398.0 176.041082164 226% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468786808009 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1284.3 506.74238477 253% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 16.0721442886 261% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.219059364 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.952380952 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.38176352705 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162225045331 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472007586052 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647855646771 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467243762384 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115898929719 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 187.0 78.4519038076 238% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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