Although some people consider that teenager crime would be because of media and its violence content, I strongly believe that a variety reasons exist and completely argue that media would be one of them. So we need to discuss the reasons raising the juvenile crime because of media and the way to prevent or decrease its rate.
The mass media focus on violent and sensational crimes and crime is one of the main subjects of most news programs. I like to mention two considerably important reasons of why media has negative effects on teenagers. First of all, people especially teenagers are looking for role models, and it seems that they have been attracted in to the criminals who playing on the movies because they think that they are cool. For example in some kind of movies, good people are usually victim or a loser of a crime, In addition, the most annoying issue for a teenager is being a loser, so he/she tries to repeat the behavior of their favorite criminal actor and obey the negative role. Secondly, talk about violent behavior repeatedly on media, might make the embarrassing and not acceptable face of that action, normal and regular, and as a result of that people behave aggressively or use violence as a usual action. Then the violence and aggressiveness enforce committing crime as the fact that violence is the start point of crime. To sum up, media has affected people in different way which we mentioned some of them above.
The solutions to resolve the increase of juvenile adequacies are like, enforcing the observations and using age limitation for Medias. At first, government should plan a powerful observation on media activities. It means; for instance, government forces the directors to produce less violent movies. Besides as another example parents have to prevent that their children watch violent movies. Secondly, it is better to use age limitation for kids or teenager when they want to use the media.
In conclusion, most of the time people believe that violent contexts of media cause to increase the teenager crimes. In fact several crime's reasons are known nowadays and media is one of the most discussable ones in addition we debate the effects and the ways to avoid the raise of the crimes above.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272289156627 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.142168674699 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771084337349 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0361445783133 0.0501214627716 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0433734939759 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144578313253 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0265060240964 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58196488482 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313253012048 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.00240963855422 0.00163938923432 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.0963855421687 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00963855421687 0.021408717616 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00963855421687 0.011925033212 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2248.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 381.0 316.048096192 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90026246719 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362204724409 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286089238845 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175853018373 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0918635170604 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58196488482 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511811023622 0.56093040696 91% => OK
Word variations: 55.6460124732 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8125 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2788386275 49.517814964 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 52.4214238845 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461048193693 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119621593372 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0873027016478 0.0668466124924 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553412295719 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174713537034 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202842795928 0.134430193775 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115701047995 0.0742795772207 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406274426138 0.324371583561 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0626560421308 0.0638462369009 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342684845166 0.228012699653 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492095200411 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.5751503006 466% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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