Although some people consider that teenager crime would be because of media and its violence content, I strongly believe that a variety reasons exist and completely argue that media would be one of them. So absolutely we need to discuss the reasons of raising the juvenile crime by using the media and the way to prevent or decrease its rate.
It is obvious that the mass media focus on violent and sensational crimes and crime is one of the main subjects of most news programs. I like to mention two considerably important reasons of why media has negative effects on teenagers. First of all, people especially teenagers are looking for role models, and it seems that they have been attracted in to the criminals who playing on the movies because they think that they are cool. For example in some kind of movies, good people are usually victim or a loser of a crime, In addition, the most annoying issue for a teenager is being a loser, so he/she tries to repeat the behavior of their favorite criminal actor and obey the negative role. Secondly, talk about violent behavior repeatedly on media, might make the embarrassing and not acceptable face of that action, normal and regular, and as a result of that people behave aggressively or use violence as a usual action. Then the violence and aggressiveness enforce committing crime as the fact that violence is the start point of crime. To sum up, media has affected people in different way which we have mentioned some of them above.
The solutions to resolve the massive increase of juvenile adequacies are like, enforcing the observations and using age limitation for media. At first, government should plan a powerful regular observation on media activities. It means; for instance, government forces the directors to produce less violent movies or check out their films once in a while. Besides as another example parents have to prevent their children to watch sensational movies or play violent games. Secondly, it is better to use age limitation for kids or teenager when they want to use the media.
In conclusion, clearly most of the time people believe that violent contents of media cause to increase the teenager crimes. In fact several crime's reasons are known nowadays and media is one of the most discussable ones in addition we debate the effects and the ways to avoid the raise of the crimes above.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261958997722 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.145785876993 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0820045558087 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0432801822323 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0455580865604 0.0437548338989 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138952164009 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0296127562642 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57810650191 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318906605923 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00455580865604 0.00163938923432 278% => OK
Determiners: 0.0956719817768 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00911161731207 0.021408717616 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00911161731207 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2376.0 1933.35771543 123% => OK
No of words: 405.0 316.048096192 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86666666667 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358024691358 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274074074074 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17037037037 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0913580246914 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57810650191 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.037074148 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508641975309 0.56093040696 91% => OK
Word variations: 56.271173051 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3125 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6532328682 49.517814964 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 127.492653851 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3125 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.814263465372 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 52.7199074074 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.83495145631 1.69124875643 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468479357787 0.332605444948 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119882536007 0.102741220458 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0790127232403 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556463553296 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166250090195 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207372434653 0.134430193775 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118111875259 0.0742795772207 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40560244637 0.324371583561 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0678230097108 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3518072812 0.228012699653 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406712311631 0.058150111329 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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