Recently, more and more aggressive TV serials are running and hence it has some detrimental results on overall growth. Some people advocate that they should be either banned or decrease in numbers. I agree with this statement to a large extent. This essay will discuss my explanation.
To begin with, nowadays a lot of TV shows related to crime and horror are made in order to attract large amount of population. It leads to some sort of negative and devastating behavior changes especially in children due to their innocent nature. There are some reports of kids harming their own self or their peers under influence of these shows. Moreover, they are constructed and projected in such a way that it looks fascinating and no one can resist themselves from seeing them. For an instance, a popular TV serial Haunted was based on the same theory and affected badly to most of the teenagers as they are more vulnerable.
Furthermore, they can lead to poor mental health and depression as well. This can be dangerous for people with fragile mindset. A number of surging sociopaths is the best example of this. Sometimes the creators donot think twice before making such kind of violent shows. Currently, showing rapes, murders, fighting sequence filled with blood, double meaning words are becoming ordinary thing. According to one study, 80% of population has direct effects on their behavior and body language from what they are seeing on regular basis. That is why these type of vulgar and harsh programs must be put on hold.
To conclude, due to large amount of negative consequences especially on children and teenagers these shows must be avoided as much as possible. However, sometimes for change or to refresh our minds they are allowed to watch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, look, moreover, so, well, kind of, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95254237288 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56598302571 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5846608402 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173913493303 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527480597413 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525190196583 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104283879603 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337392989497 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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