Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am not satisfied with one day computer course that I have attended last week on Friday. While all the other arrangements were perfect, still the way it was handled was not optimum.
Let me explain my situation. The course in which I had enrolled was supposed to teach us basic computer learning with advanced telly programming software course. First of all, the class was about to commence at 10 o' clock. Due to some technical errors and poor connectivity, the whole situation got messed up .Because of that we lost our precious time of learning into that tense atmosphere. Moreover, these issues were persistent throughout. Hence, by the time our day came to an end we got less than an hour to get our hands on telly program for which we all were very excited.
I would like to offer some suggestions so that in future everyone who are taking part in such course can have best out of it. To start with, checking all the systems and connectivity one day prior is must. On top of that having a technician standby all the time is mandatory so that there can be no delay if some issues arise.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Monali.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ivity, the whole situation got messed up .Because of that we lost our precious tim...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...ity, the whole situation got messed up .Because of that we lost our precious time of le...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ity, the whole situation got messed up .Because of that we lost our precious time of le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, while, you know, first of all, to start with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59447004608 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60100591985 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672811059908 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7194826509 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6923076923 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166590491569 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052890076971 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459452383274 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100804728139 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649173138884 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.