It is commonly believed that young people should undertake social responsibility activities in order to play their part in society. it is encouraged specially for young people to help people through different activities. this certainly has good impact over society overall but it is said to have some demerits too.
To begin with, young people now a days are so encircled in their routine life that social responsibility factor is almost neglected. it is pivotal for youth to take out time from their busy schedule & play their part. Not all the activities are done for the monetary or non-monetar...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...in order to play their part in society. it is encouraged specially for young peopl...
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Suggestion: This
...lp people through different activities. this certainly has good impact over society ...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ts too. To begin with, young people now a days are so encircled in their routine life ...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...oo. To begin with, young people now a days are so encircled in their routine life ...
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Suggestion: It
...ponsibility factor is almost neglected. it is pivotal for youth to take out time f...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...tually benefit everyone in the society. Also there are certain trust schools that of...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Well
...ivities that are obligatory to perform. well, these petty issues can certainly be ta...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...recapitulate, it is very much essential now a days for youth to spare time for social acti...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...pitulate, it is very much essential now a days for youth to spare time for social acti...
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Suggestion: Also,
...r to stick to their roots & traditions. Also for a healthy society, young people are...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...g active roles in making society better everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97734627832 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59084610956 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0635310076 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205911074414 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804264152796 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791861598157 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153010955605 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604718964379 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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