It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
Ever thought of changing the world? Well then, volunteering organisation is the place where you can render service by choice and benefit the society at large. Volunteering has changed society and youth to great extent in both positive and negative way which is discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
There are enormous benefits to both society and youth. To begin with, students can sharpen their skills by gaining practical experience which in turn will boost their curriculum vitae. Also, they can develop strong bonds with other care givers and receivers. Additionally, working without financial pay-out indicates commitment and passion towards cause. To exemplify, Canada Revenue Agency (CRA) welcomes youth to help community by handling taxation matters along with beforehand training.
Now coming to positive effects on society, firstly, work without financial aid reduces a large amount of government spending. For instance, Teach for India is an organisation in India provides basic education to uplift the under-privileged children living in slum area. Besides, it also brings out significant change in building safer, cohesive and stronger community. Furthermore, it also helps society as a whole to become more active in civic engagement and concerned of citizenship.
Even though, the remarkable pros of volunteering, there are certain cons which can not be ignored. Youth can spend time developing in new skills and strengthen educational qualification which otherwise is spent in helping others. Additionally, not all but few in society exploits people in the name of volunteering.
To conclude, although, there are few negatives of non paid work but these are outweighed majorly by impacting positively on society and young adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65283018868 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95578910162 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690566037736 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8487023872 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118487208542 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349660763573 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358233048962 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595323118281 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241877775752 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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