It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
The youth of the society has the option to voluntarily support people for the development. I agree to this view and see ample advantages for both the individuals as well as the community they belong to.
To begin with, any voluntary work within ones neighborhood brings a sense of togetherness and prosperity among the residents. For example, youngsters can bring about major positive impacts by starting small initiatives like cleaning up the area and collecting plastic and paper waste for recycling. Additionally, they can extend a helping hand to the senior citizens of the community thereby assisting them to pay their utility bills, minor electrical works within their house or even by extending aid by training them on new technology enabling to enhance their lifestyle and connecting them to their dear ones.
Moreover, this alternatively bring about a social awareness within the individual resulting in them maturing to be stronger human beings. Additionally, the youngsters can master and specialize in several practical areas in life and would gain logical thinking and knowledge which helps them in their future ventures.
However, the only shortfall in taking up free of charge task might come about when people in the society does not value such services and can misuse it. The tendency to demand tasks beyond the young people capacity might also be a substantial concern.
To conclude, there are several advantages than disadvantages to the noble act of supporting community as charity service. This should continue for the wellbeing of both the individual as well as the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ple advantages for both the individuals as well as the community they belong to. To beg...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...o begin with, any voluntary work within ones neighborhood brings a sense of together...
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Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...or the wellbeing of both the individual as well as the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30078125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8376668066 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.957511283 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147340008816 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541953919469 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332791853338 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751612769678 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322210710727 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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