It was predicted that people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent has this prediction come true ?
With the advancements in technology and rapid industrialization, people in this generation have lot of time in their hands. In my opinion, this was predicted accurately and I totally agree that 21st century citizens can do more things they desire than the past generation.
Internet changed the billions of lives with the vast resources. Information on almost everything is available and accessible to everyone. Earlier it used to take many a days or even months to know something as either we need to get in touch with the expert or read books available in limited editions where as now it is possible in fraction of seconds. For instance, research from the Cambridge mentioned that on an average details for this century was available in 10 minutes compared to the 10 days in the previous century. Hence, this way the current generation has got abundance of time.
Transportation transformed the world. Across the globe, people can reach to any destination with in few hours which was almost impossible earlier. There are many modes of travel like airways, metros, railways, bullet trains, trams, scooters, cars etcetera which helped us in reaching faster. For example, Delhi to Kochi in India would take
20 days by walk but with help of plane it is 5 hours away. This clearly conveys that with these improvements this century people can save lot of their precious time for other activities.
To conclude, it is inevitable that this century folks can do multiple things than their ancestors in the same period becuase of many technological advancements. This essay discussed how internet and travel booms have given more free time for this 21st century citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mple, Delhi to Kochi in India would take 20 days by walk but with help of plane i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, second, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07971014493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79354170119 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.520129503 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270512643563 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828083703666 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091599254461 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158339709517 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107396466911 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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