The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro

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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regards to the issue of trash collection in the Bommanahalli area. I am a resident here, facing this problem over the past month and need your intervention to solve this immediately.

In our locality, garbage truck used to come regulary on wednesday and saturday. However, in the last month there were many irregularities and noticed that the person who picks up has changed. He is reluctant to answer and found to have clash with others on questioning.

This is impacting the entire community. Lately, there has been a rise in the mosquitoes and 10 people are suffering from different kinds of illness like viral fever, dengue and malaria. This might worsen the situation if things continue.

We need your help in addressing this chaos either by replacing the person or ensuring he is regular on his duty. As long as the garbage collecction is regular we do not have any kind of troubles in this region and request to expedite this at the earliest.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely,
Sumanth Depuri

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regards to the issue o...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'clashed'.
Suggestion: clashed
...s reluctant to answer and found to have clash with others on questioning. This is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67681487446 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3785059926 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15437922319 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509092243252 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413913034539 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662944177984 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519703400356 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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