It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.
Many people believe that with inborn talent only people can be successful in the field of art and sports while other does not believe in this claim, they say that with hard work and proper efforts anything is possible to achieve. I personally think that inborn skills of body structure surely helps in achieving success up-to a certain limit but in the end it is only a persons determination and hard work which determines his or her success.
I would like to give an example of Michael Phelps worlds most renowned swimming champion. He has won 28 medals in his entire carrier. Doctors believe that due to a special structure of his arms he has a benefit of swimming fast over other competitors. Not only this, people with exceptional height had an early chance of getting selected in basketball team as compared to other people. On the contrary world is full of people who have showed that their is no such thing such as inborn talent u can always change your game through hard work. Players such as Sachin Tendulker who is know as god of cricket has attended this stature only by lot of hard work. Why consider only cricket, world best basketball player is not the one who is most heighted in the world but the one who has worked hard to achieve that position.
In conclusion, inborn abilities never decides the success or the failure of the person. It may increase the chance of that person, but in the end the hard work pays off.The person who will work hard and will be determined about his goals in-spite of all difficulties will only win or be successful in their fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'efforts'' or 'effort's'?
Suggestion: efforts'; effort's
...they say that with hard work and proper efforts anything is possible to achieve. I pers...
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Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...rtain limit but in the end it is only a persons determination and hard work which deter...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... is full of people who have showed that their is no such thing such as inborn talent ...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...Players such as Sachin Tendulker who is know as god of cricket has attended this sta...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
..., but in the end the hard work pays off.The person who will work hard and will be d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59363957597 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39202519107 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1475751504 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215688475427 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744231865168 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707083848863 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166660912676 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797833499399 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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