Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
It is argued that new technology gadgets that save effort are making our day-to-day activities much more efficient. Although some may believe that these inventions could elevate stress levels, others adamantly think such technologies are stress relievers. Personally, I Strongly support the latter view for following compelling reasons;
To begin with, equipment like dishwashing machines and laptops are time and energy savers. In other words, the work that needs several hours to be accomplished, could be finished in a few minutes which will lead to more productivity. Take the household devices as an example, those stuff are of a great help to every family members, especially for the working woman. In a highly dynamic working environment, women spend too much time outside their homes, and with the help of dishwashers, they would gain a couple of hours more to spend with their beloved ones. That is why such machines offer a great assistance in the matter of time efficiency.
Another major merit for modern technologies is that they are cost-effective. The reason behind this is that those tools can save a great amount of money, particularly in big corporates. For instance, the work of ten persons In a branch of a famous food chains restaurants could be possibly replace by one or two dishwashers. As a result, this money could be invested on other business related activities like advertising or staff training. Moreover, the cost of sending urgent messages has dramatically plummet by using of computers. Whereas in the past, it cost around 150 USDs to send a message abroad via express courier services, nowadays, your partner in a faraway country can receive your email by just one click and free of charge. Long story short, having those kits eliminated a bunch of stressful situations.
In conclusion, by saving time and money, new technologies are the best way to live a life free of stress and in a good mood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'plummeted'.
Suggestion: plummeted
...ending urgent messages has dramatically plummet by using of computers. Whereas in the p...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of stressful situations. In conclusion, by saving time and money, new technologi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82057175055 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628125 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8940042164 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156931007066 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480339282608 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534861894207 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102479739894 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672670673033 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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