In modern days, large and franchise companies are spending a lot of money on marketing methods such as advertising and their developments. As a result, the monopoly of these businesses receives a chance to distribute a lot of own goods to consumers. In my essay, I will explain why and how this is a concerning issue and put forward views on how to deal with it in a more practical and organized manner.
The first problem is that the disappointment of people on products of large companies is increasing day by day because big businesses use tricks of marketing in order to make goods to look better. For example, after buying items which are portrayed in advertising, a satisfaction of people is insufficient because a need for these products is unlike their expectation. Moreover, it is not until we buy products that we can know the real appearance. Another problem is that the popularity of one specific company blocks the possibility of new and domestic businesses to compete. In suburb areas, small businesses play for the essential role in public because large companies do not introduce their branches in these areas. Consequently, the majority of citizens tend to use products of small companies located in the suburbs.
The first solution is that big companies need to have a reward that consumers return products if their satisfaction is not enough. In my opinion, if they had this mean, problems associated with an expectation of clients would have disappeared. The second solution is that governments need to impose a high tax on franchise and large businesses of foreign nations. This way which is tough for worldwide companies will support an increase in sales of domestic products.
In conclusion, if companies and governments can use these solutions which are an extra incentive for returning goods and the amount of tax on foreign companies, it is inevitable that the satisfaction of consumers and the number of local products will boost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01533742331 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98924294975 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7894428615 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222901531589 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744451194927 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485714482931 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117484159154 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691282702678 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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