In this competitive era, every enterpreneur endorses their products to recieve maximum profits. Nowadays, big companies advertise their products in an enchanting manner using huge funds and by clever marketing tactics thus, people find those advertisements more captivating and are inclined to purchase those products. However, certain problems are also associated with it. The rationale of this essay is to shed light on various factors that actuate people to buy high end products and certain measures that can be taken to promote local products.
To begin with, massive companies invest ample amount of financial resources in advertising the products and they promote the products in captivating manner which allures people. Moreover, attractive slogans and banners marks an impression on youngsters and they tend to purchase even redundant items. Additionally, big companies glorify their products by hiring celebrities and thus abet people to buy their products. As, individuals idolize celebrities thus they fall in the trap of clever marketing gimmicks and expend money on futile things.
For instance- According to a recent survey conducted reveals the data that almost 65% people purchase products after watching enchanting advertisements.
It leads to umpteen negative consequences as people tend to waste money on pointless items. Moreover, millenials also put negative ratings to purchased product and hence value of such items drops significantly and ultimately becomes a hurdle in the growth of companies. Nevertheless, people also feel betrayed.
Besides, i believe that certain measures ought to be taken by regime to motivate the use of local products as those products are left behind because of money deficiency. In addition to, local products are available at exceptional rates and provide enriched quality, by purchasing those products we will be helping local vendors to earn their livelihood. Some awareness programmes to be launched for helping local vendors.
In conclusion, having discussed both the viewpoints in detail, I am inclined to believe that clever marketing gimmicks and captivating banners are the real culprits that attracts people to buy products. The regime should take necessary measures in order to promote local business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an enchanting manner" with adverb for "enchanting"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... big companies advertise their products in an enchanting manner using huge funds and by clever marketin...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... people also feel betrayed. Besides, i believe that certain measures ought to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6443148688 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8718281491 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3710650843 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.882352941 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321208477418 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993979070212 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629479709491 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15780092321 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053975943426 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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