During the recent times, many emerging nations are escalating tourism. People are not enticed to travel to different places due to surge in popularity of sight seeing places. I believe it is a positive trend as it helpful to accelerate economy of the country and this essay tends to shed light on various precursors that boosts tourism industry.
To commence with, in the recent years tourism industry has undergone dramatic advancements. The root cause behind rise in popularity of tourism is that it enhances the economy of the country. Firstly as the count of tourists in country increases it intensifies financial resources. The tourism industry bring foreign currency that is utilized in development of nation. For instance- Countries like thailand, Malaysia, Dubai are earning huge amount of foreign money from their tourism industry. Secondly, when increasing number of people visit to tourist attraction places, they use various facilities like transport, hotels that aids to the collection of taxes by the government and boosts the economy. Thirdly, development in tourism remarkably improves the relations between other countries.
I believe it is indubitably a positive trend as local market gets remarkable benefit as more tourists visit and spend money on purchasing souvenirs and other collectibles for their friends and family members.This also promotes business of local market, vendors earn their livelihood and earn significant amount of money. As a result many unemployed people are recruited to fulfill the needs of the hour. For instance- Recent research has revealed that in order to match the demand 70% of more job requirements were created in Thailand.
In conclusion, having discussed this essay in detail, I take the view that rise in tourism industry is indisputably a positive trend that provides innumerable advantages to people and helps in thriving country’s economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46283783784 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85688388259 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.824421686 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142341048047 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462151750882 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404587420624 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084297281704 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297868304882 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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