Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Is it advantageous or disadvantageous?
Local vendors in the community are getting affected as a consequence of attraction toward big brands in shopping malls. I completely agree with this assertion, as I believe that large shopping malls offer a better shopping experience to city residents moreover help the government to collect heavy taxes. So this is a welcoming trend that looks set to continue.
In this fast-paced world, every individual tends to live an attractive life which enforces them to experience shopping from large shopping centres. It has been seen that as nowadays people from their hustle bustle life, able to manage much less time for shopping, which results in mega shopping complex gets into demand. It is a matter of fact that mega-businesses buy the product in large quantity which helps them to sell a variety of products at a cheaper rate. In contrast, small vendors as per the less public demand buy less quantity which hampers the cost of the product.
In addition, due to the large demand for products buying from shopping centres leads them to pay a heavy tax to the government, which is helpful for the fast development of the country. In other words, collecting taxes from small vendors is often unmanageable, as the amount is so small as compared to big malls. For instance, people are getting a variety of fruits and vegetables at a cheap rate from reliance store which causing neglection of local shops and therefore reliance is able to pay a heavy amount of tax to the government.
To conclude, even though, local vendors are easily approachable and beyond the personal interaction with customers where large shopping malls are lagging, it is advantageous for the betterment of the society to have shopping complexes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or the fast development of the country. In other words, collecting taxes from smal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01045296167 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74637408728 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3854798482 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182219331565 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753885553886 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052080115249 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126431190951 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038521165197 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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