Education after graduation has become mandatory in the contemporary world in order to increase the highest qualification and initiate an ideal career. In the last 10years there is a surge in the number of students
studying online courses due the advancements in technology. Some
believe the flow of knowledge is ideal in the traditional classroom learning methodology. Here I would like to account the advantages and drawbacks of doing an online course. To embark on, After the pandemic due to the novel corona virus
, online learning facility has managed to tutor the pupil and has kept
them safe as well. Secondly, students can experience visual learning in their comfort zone where the flow of knowledge is not merely in audio format, Pupil's Concepts can be cleared using animations and graphics on screens unlike the blackboards in the traditional classrooms. Further more, there are few courses which are native to specific countries and student should travel abroad in order to complete the particular courses but now
due to virtual classes students can study any course from their homes. On the flip side, School is considered as the temple of learning, where individuals not only gain knowledge but also grow in terms of culture, discipline and social skills, but due to the convenience, online courses are preferred by most people which can lead to eradication of traditional classrooms. To add on, a student requires a good presence of mind in order to gain maximum knowledge which I believe is not equally possible in virtual classes. Lastly, A teacher requires minimum response from the students
to be motivated during a class, In a traditional classroom the tutor can understand be the response of the class if students are catching up with the syllabus.
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society such as scientists or teachers are the most successful Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Some people think that to be successful you need to get in university education whereas others say it is not true Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion 85
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment why is this happening and what are the measures 56
- Some people think that to be successful you need to get in university education whereas others say it is not true Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... pandemic due to the novel corona virus , online learning facility has managed to...
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Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can study any course from their homes. On the flip side, School is considered a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13448275862 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81157204303 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4331060233 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.9 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164051127918 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675816351316 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639467529265 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770495444147 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318129058299 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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