Leader and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable mostly team managers are elder employees. According to some, the younger individuals as a leader are more competent and can give better outputs. I disagree with the notion and believe that experience matters a lot in becoming a leader.
Experience is the major factor in any organization to lead and mostly younger individuals are inadequate with experience, therefore companies prefer to choose aged people. Important decisions and holding nerves during crises situations can only learnt through experience which are vital for the organization to run the business smoothly all the time. A recent survey from Management college of India, revealed that only 10 per cent business survive with young leaders in Maharashtra state, for that reason experience makes a difference for any organization and they select older individuals over younger one.
Another factor is the respect and employees listen to elder leaders as compared to new comer. It is obvious that elder heads are treated in a respected way and employees often follow their ideas and guidelines without questioning them. Older team leader is working for long time with other employees and they do not prove their capabilities, therefore people respect them and follow their paths without a query. Comparing new comers need to prove their talent and skills before commanding any time in the department and it takes time.
In conclusion, usually in organizations employee listen to elders and behave in good manners with them and capacity to deliver crucial decisions during emergency to maintain the business reputation can only be learnt through experience and young leaders lack that potential, therefore I believe that elder employees are better leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76837302839 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0705376171 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192479216056 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076073408118 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615238909692 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123239597456 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457874890022 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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