Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader
would be better.Do you agree or disagree.
There are common that leader in the company are older people but some point of view that leader should be younger people. In my opinion, older leader better than younger leader however younger people can become a good leader in the near future if they are long-suffering to study from their senior managers.
To begin with, older people can be good leader for some reasons. Firstly, older people have more adequate experience in both leadership and working. Older leader have many years to work and they understand more than anyone else about working process and obstacles in work. Also, they can resolve problems quickly and direct truly junior. Secondly, older people often have respect from others. This is because they contribute and bring success to the compaeny they work for. There for, they have powerful, voice big nerve system and people can obey them. In opposite, it is difficult that younger people can direct people who are the same generation.
On the other hand, the important positions should be given for older people. In fact, older people have more creation so they can have newer way to resolve work. While they do not have good health and they can work by heart and bring tremendous benefits for company As the time spent working with their apprentices, they can teach their experience and leadership to younger candidates.
In conclusion, leader positive should be given for older people, because younger people need to be supported by older generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06910569106 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3190584848 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7922569035 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252162798457 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117193070846 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992863299182 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210154885216 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887785659002 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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